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Why People Should
Read for Pleasure
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In the past
years the use of the television and the internet has increased; this
situation has caused many people to change their likes and the way that
they enjoy their free time. Because of television and the internet,
many people spend less time reading, so the purpose for this essay is to
present reasons why people should read just for pleasure. The
reasons that I give you are quite simple: to improve your knowledge, to
expand your general culture, to have more fun, to make your imagination
fly, to find new ways to express your ideas, and finally to expand your
vocabulary.
The
first reason that I give you to enjoy reading is that when you read, you
can expand your knowledge and also your culture. There are a lot of good
books in which you can find history, novels, tragedies, comedies and a
variety of other themes. You can see that people who read more often
frequently have a bigger knowledge of life and also a bigger perspective
of their environment. I think that fact gives them an advantage
over all others who do not read frequently.
The
second reason to read more often is that through books you can have fun
and even travel in your imagination. Children have not yet lost the
ability of getting into their dreams, and because of this, in their
first years the parents read a lot of tales in which they use their
imagination. Adults should try to keep this ability, so we do not forget
the importance of the use of the imagination. The imagination also represents
a tool that could help you to develop your professional career in a
creative way.
Finally,
the third and the most important feature that reading offers you is that
it does not matter the age that you have, you always could expand your
vocabulary and the ways to express your ideas to the others in a simple
and correct form. By the time you can improve the kind of books that you
read, there are a lot of categories, so you will never stop learning from
the pleasure of reading. People who know how to choose a book generally
have the capability of choosing a formal book in which they can find
formal grammatical structures and obviously a formal vocabulary.
All these things allow them to gain greater fluency in their
communication.
In
conclusion, I recommend that you enjoy reading more often. There are
excellent reasons for doing it; you just have to want to expand
your knowledge and your culture, to improve your imagination and also
your vocabulary. I know that we should evolve with the technology; that is,
it is good to know how to navigate in the internet, but we must also not
forget the books. Try to choose good books at the beginning, and then I
ensure you that you never will stop reading.
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Paragraph Structure:
4
Based off
the first paragraph, I would think that the paper has to do with television and
internet as opposed to reading. Each paragraph was structured and stayed
focused with its theme. I would suggest better transitions from paragraph to
paragraph.
Unity: 4
Altogether, the paper flowed well.
The ideas within the paragraph are cohesive with one another, although, the
writer could have use stronger claims.
Coherence: 3
Logical Bridge- The sentences
within the paragraph connected with the theme. There were no random thoughts
floating around in the essay.
Verbal Bridge- The author should
try to avoid the repetition of words. The writer should work on using stronger
transitions within the paper.
Supporting Details: 3
The writer did not have any
sources within the paper. They made general claims without backing up their
statements. It seems like the writer used their own opinion instead of
gathering information from other resources.
Grammar: 2
The essay lacked in vocabulary.
They could have used stronger words within the essay to make it more formal.
The author should have avoided the repletion of certain words and phrases.
There were some random semicolons and commas throughout the paper that were
misplaced.
GRADE: 16/25-
64%- D
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